Sootstar [Not Finished!]

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So, since this is for a leader position, I could send you a PM with a roleplay example in it. If you would like. Just lemmie know... Haha. I just wanted to post this so I don't lose it, but it's not done.

GENERAL

Name: [Sootkit/paw/storm] Sootstar

Explanation:
Soot- The black color of her fur resembles the color of soot.
Storm/Star- The black and white spots are splattered around and sort of wild like a storm, I suppose. Also, her mother was named Blackstorm, so the storm part could be in honor of her.

Gender: She-cat

Age: 51 moons

Clan: CliffClan

Rank: Leader

APPEARANCE

Build: Sootstorm has a medium-sized build, for the most part. Her hind legs are muscular, but not too big. One wouldn’t see her as an intimidating opponent in a fight, but she would surprise most. Her muscles are wirey and thin, rather than bulky, so the cat doesn’t look muscular, she just is.

Fur: Black and white.

Eyes: She has beautiful, large, golden eyes with darker flecks scattered among them. Her eyes really stand out against her fur colors, and are usually the first thing that a cat notices about her.

Markings: The other thing that is noticed right away, is the black spot right on her nose. There is an upside down "v" spot filled with white that starts near Sootstorm's forehead. The black spot forms right on top of the white, inbetween her eyes. Then it travels all the way down the bridge and stops smack dab on her nose. Then, the white that surrounds the black spot spreads out and runs across her cheek bones, then down her neck and chest. While we're on the subject of Sootstorm's chest.. there is another significant marking there as well, that is noticable also. If she is standing with her legs like this " | | ", then the spot is right inbetween the crease of her front legs, under her chest. It is a black spot that looks sort of strange, but others don't take too much notice of it. Her front legs are strange. There are black spots that spiral down both her left and her right front legs. The spirals stop near the middle of her legs, leaving her paws to be white.

Overall: She has the kind of look that some cats may find beautiful. But others may not. Sootstorm would be one to stand out in a crowd. Her fur is just a mixture of black and white that swirl in with one another, creating a pattern along her body. Sootstorm's tail starts black at the base and continues black until it gets a pretty far way up her tail. Then the black abrubtly stops, and continues on as white. The white stops a few inches up, and the very tip of her tail is black. It looks unusual, but Sootstorm likes it. She gets many questions regarding her tail, which most of them come from kits, who squeak "Your tail looks funny! How did it get like that?" Or "Is your tail supposed to be like that?" The she-cat finds it quite amusing.

The cat is very clumsy, though it has gotten progressively better over the years. Sootstar has small paws, which are one of the many reasons for her clumsiness. She can't balance correctly on them. Another reason for that is her tail. It is long and thin, and the cat constantly trips over it, if she doesn't keep it out from under her paws [which she finds difficult]. Sootstar has short, wide ears with little white fuzzies in them. Her nose is black and a little bit on the wide side. It curves out at an angle and is kind of pushed down into her face. The she-cat has white, spread-out whiskers that stick out this way and that. They are very defined against the black spots on her pelt.

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PERSONALITY

Positive Traits:

• Patient
  
• Energetic
  
• Has good self-control
  
• Respect
  
• Great sense of humor
  
• Flying ability
  
• Laid-back
  

Negative Traits:

• Clumsy
  
• Arrogant
  
• Hunting ability
  
• Mysterious
  
• Perhaps not as stern as she should be..
  

Likes:

• Flying
  
• Young Cats
  
• 
  
• 
  

Dislikes:

• Hunting
  
• Night time
  
• Disrespect
  

Fears:

• Misleading her Clan
  
• StarClan betraying them
  

Ideals:

• Faith in ancestors [StarClan]
  
• Respect
  
• Loyalty
  

Other: Clarify that which needs clarification, add what needs adding...sum the personality up, basically.

HISTORY

Family:
Blackpaw - Brother - [deceased]
Blackstorm- Mother - [deceased]

History:

---Sootkit
Around the time Sootkit was born, the hawks and eagles were nesting in CliffClan territory. About a moon or so after her birth, the Clan decided to drive the birds away. They needed all of the help possible and took most of the willing queens out of the nursery to assist in the banishing, including Blackstorm, Sootkit and Blackkit's mother. Blackstorm never returned. Sootkit didn't understand why, because she was so young, but it was explained to her later that her mother had broken a wing and fell from a cliff's edge to her death. Therefore, Sootkit and Blackkit grew up without their real mother, and were raised by another queen. The whole Clan pitied them and babied the two through their kithood, and still even when they became apprentices. Sootkit and Blackkit only had eachother as kin now, --since their father was a mystery to them-- and they grew very close. They were inseparable by the time of their apprentice ceremony.

---Sootpaw
They very-anticipated day had finally come when Sootkit became Sootpaw, along with her brother. They were ecstatic to finally have more freedom and begin training. A couple of moons into their apprenticeships, curiosity kicked in and Sootpaw and Blackpaw decided that they wanted to explore their territory. All was well and they were having a great time [though they knew they weren't supposed to be outside of camp], until Blackpaw spotted a small mouse dashing behind rocks and into cracks. Being the stubborn cat that he was, Blackpaw ignored Sootpaw's warnings and attempts to get him away from the danger of the open skies and rough land. She stayed back as she watched her brother successfully catch the mouse, then of course dance around and brag about it. Then, he stumbled, tripping over his paws, getting one of them stuck in a crack. As much as he tried pulling it out, nothing worked. That sucker was lodged in there. Just as Sootpaw was about to venture out an help him, a humongous hawk swooped down and snatched Blackpaw right up into its talons. The last image of her brother that Sootpaw remembers is the wide-eyed, horrified look on his face.

Of course, this event scarred Sootpaw even worse than her mother dying, because she didn't even know her mother when she was just a kit, but her brother had been her best friend. The rest of her apprenticeship was very tough to get through without her brother, but in a way, it made her more determined to push through it. It was sort of like she was doing it for him.

---Sootstorm


---Sootstar



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