Silvershadow of Waveclan

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GENERAL

Name: Greykit, Silverpaw, Silvershadow
Explanation: As a kit she was a dull gray color, then as she grew older her fur became shinier and a silvery color, and eventually she started to take on spots- and a stripe on her spine.(Plus no one really knows who her father is, so it was an irony-type thing)
Gender:she-cat
Age: 30 moons
Clan:WaveClan
Rank: Medicine Cat

APPEARANCE

Build: muscled, but thin
Fur: silvery color
Eyes: Green
Markings:black spots on sides, head and legs, white-ish underbelly and a black stripe down her back
Overall: A beautifully streamlined she-cat, with silvery base coat. Her black markings only accent her beauty ever more, making a great contrast between her silver back and sides, and white underbelly. Webbed paws and soft green eyes complete her look.

PERSONALITY

Positive Traits: clever, has faith in most, hard-working, friendly
Negative Traits: rejects change, disorganized, immature, unconfident, clumsy
Likes: kits(since she can't have her own) and Butterflies
Dislikes: bossy toms, change, and being alone
Fears: Falling in love, being wrong
Ideals: In others: Confidence/ In Herself: friendliness
Other: As a medicine cat Silvershadow finds the tensions over the islands pretty pointless. If it was her choice she would declare them neutral ground for Cliffclan and Waveclan.
She views Grassclan as a problem, because of them there was so much confusion and she got yelled at alot during and after the battle. This caused her much trouble, and her insecurity problems.
If there was a battle Silvershadow wouldn't know what to do with herself. She would be alone for the first battle, and if she screwed up it could be a deadly mistake.

HISTORY

Family: Mom: Fishface(<-- xD)
Sibling(s):
Sister: Spraypaw-died from of sickness
Mentor:
Troutwhiskers- died of natural causes

History: As a kit, Greykit loved playing with the other kits in the nursery. But for some reason(maybe because of her dull gray coat) they also chose her to be the mouse.
Then as Silverpaw grew older her sister died eventually. Her only sibling, and the one she cherished deeply was gone! Silverpaw mourned for a long time, and decided to try harder to be the best medicine cat apprentice ever- to prevent others from having the same fate. But sadly, whenever she did something wrong her mentor got very mad.
The battle with Grassclan made Silverpaw very nervous. There were so many injuries that Silverpaw skipped meals while trying to cure the injuries. Her mentor still scolded her alot, because of all the confusion Silverpaw made mistakes more than often.
Now a medicine cat Silvershadow is still pretty unconfident and immature, and unsure of what to do.
After Troutwhiskers died Silvershadow felt slightly relieved. She knew it was wrong, but she did. The only thing that bothered her is that there was no one to correct her when wrong, or fix her mistakes. Silvershadow didn't really grieve, but she did miss him.

RP SAMPLE

Quiet as the wind,

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as graceful as the dance of flowers that take your Breath away.

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Quietbreath sighed as the wind of the open moor tugged at his clean white fur. It made him long for something more, but what he didn't know. He just needed to go back to his warrior-apprentice days and take down a rabbit. That was the one thing he was good at before he became a medicine cat apprentice. The long grasses brushed comfortingly against his side and he ducked down under the tips of them, keeping his tail low.

Catching the scent of a rabbit he stretched a delicate kit-like paw forward. The grasses tickled it,bit he resisted the urge to purr in pleasure. The tom took another step forward, as the wind blew the scent towards him. The rabbit was close. Quietbreath tensed his back legs, and released the muscles all at once, pouncing on a rabbit. He unsheathed his claws just in time to sink them into the warm body of the rabbit. Purring as it died he thanked starclan for the life of the prey and licked the blood off of his claws.

Knowing he should probably bring something back for the rest of the clan after he was done with his meal. But first matters first- the slim tom leaned down to take a delicate bite of the rabbit. While he was chewing he crouched down, brushing his tail slowly over the ground. Today was going to be a great day.[/left]

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WORDCOUNT i'm guesstimating about 400
TAGGED anyone
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NOTES i was super distracted ;_;
CREDIT TO iDamen of caution 2.0!

[Administrator]

Good RP sample ^.^

Okay, just do a few things for me. First of all, I'd like you to add to the history a bit. It's a tad compact and not terribly clear ^.^ Check out the [Important] Events of the Past thread and do try to add in the battle between GrassClan and WaveClan. Was she a medicine cat by then? How did it effect her? Also, please name the medicine cat before her (you can come up with the name) so other members know who to refer to if they ever need to. Mention how he/she died, and how that effected Silvershadow.

Secondly, although the "other" part of the personality isn't required, I'd like you to write a few sentences about how she feels about CliffClan and GrassClan, and why. Since she is going to be medicine cat and will be advising the leader, it is very important to know how she feels about the two Clans that will be soon fighting hers.

Finally, do add a bit about her webbed feet in her appearance, if only to show you know that she has them (which, of course you do). Maybe mention if she's an average WaveClan swimmer, better than average, or whatever.

[pidge]

Oh I forgot that stuff, and Ok!!
^.^ thanks.

[Administrator]

No problem! Just post back here when you've made changes and I'll check it ^.^

[pidge]

Okay, all should be in check now. Hopefully....

[Administrator]

Okay, we're almost there! Just two more things

She views Grassclan as a problem, because of them there was so much confusion and she got yelled at alot during and after the battle.

I think I know what you're trying to get across there, but can you make it just a tad clearer?

Also, just one more thing:
Please name the medicine cat before her (you can come up with the name) so other members know who to refer to if they ever need to. Mention how he/she died, and how that effected Silvershadow.

If you fix that, that'll be it ^.^

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[pidge]

grrrr
I fixed that ^.^ thank you for being patient. I can be pig-headed and stubborn at times.

[Administrator]

Okay, accepted! Thank you for being patient.

Here's the thing--I didn't make you write an RP sample of a WaveClan cat. So when you start roleplaying I just want you to keep in mind that she'll have big, clumsy paws and webbing, so that'll definitely effect the way you roleplay.

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